“I love it!” she exclaimed, severing our first kiss and looking down to admire the birthday present.
I was still in shock when she suddenly frowned and held up the pocket watch, aghast, and said, “I don’t think it’s working.”
“No,” I smiled, staring at the stalled second hand, “It’s just savoring the moment.”
Written for Week 30 of Three Line Tales.
photo by Rachel Crowe
So sweet and touching. That last line was powerful.
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Ohhhhh, swoon-worthy!!!!!
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Definitely did 🙂
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This was so sweet! 🙂
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Such a sweet little story 🙂 Good work.
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Thank you
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Made me smile…
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I’m glad 😀
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Oooh, I like. A lot! Great take on the photo 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Oh this is so beautiful!😊
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Thanks Sonali!
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That’s really sweet! What a lovely thought 🙂
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